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Friday 25 August 2017

persuasive writing



Persuasive writing.
Everybody should own a dog


Disagree


1. Everybody should not have dog because they have
Fleas.


2. Everybody should not have dog because they damage
The Property.

3. Everybody should not have a dog because they are
Dangerous.


I disagree I think everybody should not have a dog because they steal food and they are dangerous because they not good.


P1 i think you should not own a dog because they are naughty and they roam around and scare people and sometimes bite people.


I think we should not have dogs because they damage property and wreak the good stuff
By biting it.


They also cost too much money because we have to buy a home for the dog and bowl..

P2 we should not have dog because they might bite your hand and they are not good around children because they  can be dangerous.


Dogs also have fleas and they may have a lot of fleas  and they may  sharp claws and may scratch you.


P3 we should not have a dog because you have to pick up the dogs poo and you have to do things for the dog like you have to pick up their Rubbish and their food.



Co. i think everyone should not have a dog because it is a lot of work.

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